Western Digital Rhymes
Published Monday, July 10, 2006 by Ankit | E-mail this post
What can a boy do when he loses his most valuable possession? When he's all alone in a town that no one's heard of? And all he had was his music and his movies to remind him of his cherished past...to celebrate his present...to give him courage to face his future. What can a boy do when he loses everything???
He
will start over. He
will learn from his mistakes. He
will be more careful. He
will regain everything.
But before all that, he will express his grief through a few words:
staring at the wallfrom the top of my bedthinking of youand all those things you saidyou made me seem invincibleoh, what a feeling to imbedyou made me think that there wereonly happy days aheadbut now you're gone awayand it's too late to shedmy tears of sorrowfrom a mind misleadbut i think i'm almost done nowenough have i bledit's time to move on nowand let my words be readi know i should be sleepingbut i'm staying up insteadwondering how it would've beenif you weren't long gone and deadMood: sad
Music: ....
Good Night.
your poetic skills have come a looooonnnngggg way...
sorry for your loss babe
There are no metaphors in your poem...
Anyways, good poem though. I like it
Good poem...